I'd like to try to increase the humor by an order of magnitude. Or at least the number of responses in the discussion area on the blog.
This follow-up was meant to be published last Wednesday. Or Thursday. Or Friday. Actually, I thought about doing it before the "Mole" comic.
EDIT: Typo fixed.
3 comments:
you want feedback, ok, here's editing.
When incrementing 22nd (TWENTY-SECO*ND) to (TWENTY-THI*RD) must increment n to r as well, for 23RD, not 23ND.
What is "back on the lane"? Crossing / Bus-stop duty with lightsaber / safety wand ?
Thanks. I'll fix the "nd" to "rd" when I get home. So much for proof-reading when I'm tired.
Typo fixed.
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