They're at the beach, so blame the heat of the moment.
This actually works well for Isabel because she'd be the only one of the two couples that didn't play soccer. Whether she has anything in common with Daisy and Hal, other than Shaun, remains to be seen.
The dialogue was natural to write because it didn't occur to me at first that Isabel was the "obvious" first choice to ask, except that she just started becoming friends with Daisy. (But she's still hands off at the moment.)
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