Monday, October 07, 2013

The Number of the Beast

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(C)Copyright 2013, C. Burke.

I'd like to try to increase the humor by an order of magnitude. Or at least the number of responses in the discussion area on the blog.

This follow-up was meant to be published last Wednesday. Or Thursday. Or Friday. Actually, I thought about doing it before the "Mole" comic.

EDIT: Typo fixed.




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3 comments:

  1. UnknownMonday, October 07, 2013 12:33:00 PM

    you want feedback, ok, here's editing.

    When incrementing 22nd (TWENTY-SECO*ND) to (TWENTY-THI*RD) must increment n to r as well, for 23RD, not 23ND.

    What is "back on the lane"? Crossing / Bus-stop duty with lightsaber / safety wand ?

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  2. (x, why?)Monday, October 07, 2013 12:37:00 PM

    Thanks. I'll fix the "nd" to "rd" when I get home. So much for proof-reading when I'm tired.

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  3. (x, why?)Monday, October 07, 2013 6:25:00 PM

    Typo fixed.

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